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Review #4801343
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Life Open in new Window. [E]
The beauty of the senses.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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There is a lot to take in considering this is a very short story. It seems there is a lot going on. I did not notice any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors by the way. There is quite a good and picturesque description of the sun rising. I picture a very warm, spring day. I picture a light breeze and the scent of freshly budding plants. Then the attention is turned indoors. A baby is being born. The theme of the story seems to be new beginnings with a pleasant and happy vibe. I often do wonder what goes through the new born's mind as it takes it all in.

Thanks for sharing this lovely story with us. I enjoyed reading it. Great job. I look forward to reading more.


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