Hi Gitisapoint, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Te Reign of Ronin Phoenix "  by Gitisapoint

Clarity: Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style: Fantasy sci-fi drama.



Are all 3 genres listed?No, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good format however the structure appears crowded making it not so easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate to its speaker.

My favorite line:---Razia's heart raced as she felt the weight of their expectations bear down on her. She knew the consequences if she failed to meet their demands.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well worded and well described fantasy tale that intrigues the reader's mind. A creative work with good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the setting.

Gitisapoint, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a bit more line spacing and breaking down the longer paragraphs into shorter ones with a blank line between paragraphs. This will make it easier on the reader and more appealing to a browser or would be reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
"disABILITY WRITERS GROUP"