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Oh My, Helene Open in new Window. [E]
Before you know it, she pulls you in.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the havoc that Helene would wreck in your life.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poet seems as if they are a bystander, so maybe one of their friends was wrecked by Helene. Then again, she just might be a hurricane. I love how there's a double meaning here.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There is no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Here deluge of actions pours down around you, flooding your senses and drowning your emotions," I love the 'complicated' descriptions used in this poem! These descriptions can take you on a journey. Hurricane Helene wrecked the southeastern part of the USA last fall, but there are some girls that cause an equal amount damage should you choose to let them into your life. The descriptions are succinct and paint vivid pictures in the reader's mind.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening grabs the reader, plunks them down in the middle of chaos and expects them to walk out. The title fits the poem well. Excellent expression.

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