Hello BeckaChristina56

The Read & Review function of the site brought me here. I noticed that you joined on February 15 and haven't come back since. I hope you log on soon to see the reviews you've received. A quick glance at your portfolio shows that your writing has already been noticed and has garnered reviews.

The title is simple enough and it connects to the poem.

The intro line Its about belonging to royalty has a typo. It should be "it's" because it is a contraction of "it is."

The poem itself has a good pattern. The lines mirror one another in the top & bottom, second and fourth lines, neatly separated by a strong statement in the middle.

The poem itself is easy enough to understand. At the same time, it also raises questions. Like whose throne? And belonging to the throne in what function? There are so many possibilities. As a poet, you're obviously not called to explain your words, those are just my thoughts.

My main suggestions for this piece are that you fix the typo in the intro line and, if you want to, center the text and make it in a larger font. You can also add a thumbnail picture to the poem to make it stand out more.



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