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 Review #4800261 |
 | Wrapped In Your Arms  [18+] I'll get lost in your essence  |
| (5.0)  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM This is poem was inspired by the Bruno Mars & Lady Gaga song "Die with a Smile."  WHAT I LIKEDThe prompt was to listen to the song and write something that the song inspired. The author did a great job capturing the smoldering sensuality of the song.  STRUCTUREThis is an Acrostic poem using "Die with A Smile." MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make the poem easier to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "A shiver runs through me only you can give." It's a simple sentence, but it really communicates a lot. It could be a look, a simple gesture, holding hands, or even the wisp of perfume. There's a lot of subtly here that makes the read slow and think what it would mean to their lives. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening draws the reader in well and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. The introduction does a great job setting the mood/tone of the content and explaining the entry for the prompt. The Title fits the poem well. Nice, simmering expression.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"  An Angel Army Review
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