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Siblings Open in new Window. [E]
I'm thankful I have siblings even though they can be quite mean
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem dedicated to siblings who do things you love and things you don't.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the character voice, sincerity, and honesty that came across.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form "list" poem. There are some rythmes, but no there's no structured rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make the poem easier to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I guess I can forgive them for some of their not so nice actions." This is a very simple statement, but I think it sums up the complicated feelings we all have toward our siblings.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader, and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. The Title fits the poem well. Nice child-like expression.

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