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Only With You, Lord/ A Psalm Open in new Window. [E]
I praise your Holy Name, O' Lord.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE POEM

A psalm dedicated to the love of the Lord.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the reverence of the psalm and how emotionally moving the Lord's love when it touched the poet's life.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. While there are rythmes, there is no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I see you in the colors of dawn, Feel you even in the slightest breeze." It's a vivid description using a good economy of words that tug on emotional chords. I can see the dawn, rich oranges and red, and feel the slightest wind gently wisp on by. These descriptions of nature helps to give the poem emotional depth.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. Well done.

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