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Given: Feb 13, 2025 at 6:12pm
Length: 1,465 Characters |
1,219 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
A psalm dedicated to the love of the Lord.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the reverence of the psalm and how emotionally moving the Lord's love when it touched the poet's life.
STRUCTURE
This is free form poem. While there are rythmes, there is no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "I see you in the colors of dawn, Feel you even in the slightest breeze." It's a vivid description using a good economy of words that tug on emotional chords. I can see the dawn, rich oranges and red, and feel the slightest wind gently wisp on by. These descriptions of nature helps to give the poem emotional depth.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening engages the reader and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. Well done.
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