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Tattered Soul Open in new Window. [ASR]
Life lessons can leave us torn and tattered.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem dedicated to life and the hardships we face.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the ending stanza - it gives the reader a minute to contemplate our lives, the people we are, the people we think we are, and the people we want to be.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. While there are rythmes, there is no set rythming pattern.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font size to make it easier to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "The grime of life clings to us in thick layers," It dares the reader to give a good long, hard at themselves, to evaluate our grime and examine just how thick it is. It gives the poem depth.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening is intense and wrangles the reader right in, putting them in the moment, and keeps them reading. The title fits the poem well. Nice expression.

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