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 stop investigating financial abuse Open in new Window. [E]
The consumer financial watchdog instructe to stop investigating financial abuse.
by khalid rida Author Icon
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Rated: E | (2.5)
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Hello khalid rida Author Icon,

This looks like mock article. Or it's just copied. Which is not allowed without stating a reason and proper citations as you are not likely holding the copyright to something published by CNN. And if you do, you should include a mention of that within this item.

In any case, the article has some glaring issues. Either it's not fully fleshed out or there were some problems with the transcription or copying. See my comments below.

stop investigating financial abuse You should capitalize each first letter.

3 that mandated that CFPB employees cease issuing rules Is there something missing? A sentence never starts with a digit. If a number is needed, it is spelled out. But even if this said "Three," it doesn't seem to make sense with the words thereafter.

Vought added supervision to the freeze by restating the tasks that Bessent had instructed staff to cease Where did Bessent come from? He was never mentioned before. It's not clear what his role is and why his instructions need restating.

These kind of articles are all over the place. Just like this one, I find many of them lacking with enough background information that makes them understandable. So much comes across as hearsay when this kind of stuff should be reported diligently.



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