Hello Anhait ,

This poem took me on a road trip along with your muse. There are some great visuals of open roads, carefully packed luggage, and the harmony of your inner music. It's also secretive as it's something personal that nobody but you can see. Without knowing for certain, it appears that English is not your first language. It gives the whole text an endearing, raw, and honest feel that super prim and proper English could not achieve. Nonetheless, I noticed a few style / grammar things. Check them out and make changes if you agree.

Where I Meet Myself:Anahit's Muse Leave a space after the colon.

HEY,WHO IS THERE? Leave a space after the comma.

I packed my each song in a travelling bag The turn of phrase "my each" is unusual. Are you sure that's what you wanted to go with?

Since you are using this as an advertisement for your poetry book, I suggest that you look up how to make working links on Writing.com. WritingML Help has all the needed pieces. You can at least make a direct link to your Amazon book. And you can construct a x-link to your Kobo book.



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