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 When She Cries Open in new Window. [E]
Music Lyrics
by C. Michael Salter Author Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Positives

I really liked the structure and the story you tell in this piece. I can definitely imagine it being set to music and being a really impactful song. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read and thought you did a good job with these song lyrics. Well done!


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