Hello MilkyInfinity ,

Reading Drexler Adventure made me think he was mostly homeless and had gone mad from it. The match lighting for no good reason and his inner thoughts don't seem to make much sense to anyone outside of his own mind. Living out on the streets without a safe place to rest, sleep, and eat is truly not a way of living for humans.

I noticed several spelling and punctuation issues throughout the text. I gave you a few examples below, but there were more. You should give this piece a thorough read-over to check for missing apostrophes.

Drexler didnt count didn't

“ I want more pretty girls”. That first quotation mark has to be flush with the first letter of the sentence. I checked your Biography and it says you are from Chicago, so you should be using US punctuation. The period goes inside of the quotation mark. “I want more pretty girls.”

He wasnt aware wasn't

The missing apostrophes make me wonder if this was supposed to be called "Drexler's Adventure" as in his adventure.

This very short piece is a good beginning or a vignette to get to know Drexler. Now, it would make sense to flesh this tale out and let the readers into his world and how he got there.