Hello Wordsmith John

I found your poem on the "Plug" page

The title of the poem

Appealed to me perhaps because I do not see myself as "ordinary" as it were, it seemed to give me vibes that the writer is perhaps not totally happy about their "oddness" or perhaps that is just me projecting!

To me, the poem is about

A person who perhaps suffers from a mental health condition - or it could be just about someone who is odd, or someone who has taken drugs and it has affected their mind, it made me think of drug induced psychosis because of the reference to the berries and the doctors.

What I liked about the poem was

The odd imagery - it made me have to think twice about what it was about and how the lines related to each other. At first it read a bit like "nonsense verse" but then on reading it a second and third time, it seems to have a deeper meaning, although perhaps I don't know what the meaning was

Your poem made me feel

Like I wanted to get to know the writer more

The only thing I would suggest/was unsure of

The two verses feel a bit disjointed, as though there should maybe be another one in the middle giving us more information? As though there may be a bit missing.

Overall -

I liked this poem and its weirdness, I liked your writing style. I think people often think I am a bit unusual too, although sometimes I want to be just like everyone else








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