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Pockets of Metal Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about my decision to leave the Great Britain swim team
by Fran 🌈🧜‍♀️ Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Leaving a team. One has to wonder; why, why leave? Reasons can vary, and can include, but are not limited to - lack of pay, hostile teammate/s, knowing no one due to changes in the rooster, being injured in such a way to prevent one from participating effectively, or there are other jobs that pay better. There are many reasons. The trick is picking the right one.

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An interesting poem that makes one think.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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