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 My Year Of Freedom Open in new Window. [E]
A worship song I wrote about overcoming addictions
by Aaron Sullivan Author Icon
Review by Annette Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hello Aaron Sullivan Author Icon,

These lyrics are a great testament to shedding an addiction. If it takes faith to replace a chemical addiction, then that's a good use of faith. I hope that the song is true and that there is a whole year of sobriety to look back on.

A few observations about the overall presentation follow.

Your disclaimer at the top mentions that the audio is coming soon. Then, there is a link at the bottom that goes to a YouTube video. Without clicking on the link at the bottom, I'm not quite sure how to understand this part of the disclaimer:

I use AI to bring my songs to life…this time the AI didnt do all the lyrics but most of them

Does AI sing your song or write the lyrics for your song? I haven't really gotten into the AI game yet. I made a few images, which appeared easy enough. And yielded some freaky results. I don't know how much text or how many keywords you have to give AI to make a whole text or song, so that would be something to make very clear since we're all here to read & review each other's writing and creativity. It's not a problem if you used AI to generate the lyrics since you have that disclaimer.

Little typos:

my heart, my mind, my life *Right* My

Im not alone *Right* I'm

Fourth line from the bottom this is my year of freedom! *Right* This

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