Hello, Drifter!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Joyous Adventure" acrostic poem every time I read it, including today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I read this "Joyous Adventure" poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "January" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Your poem shared some of the many good things about this joyous adventure we have living on earth while loving the Lord and looking forward to Heaven with Him.

I thought the acrostic poem format worked nicely with the message of your "Joyous Adventure" poem.

My favorite line was the "Overtly gifting others with grace," line because it was unique and something I hope the Lord will enable me to do more.

I wondered if this was written for a contest here? If you haven't entered it in the "Poetic Traditions" contest yet, I believe it qualifies.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Joyous Adventure" poem.

I thought the religious and personal genres you selected for this poem were a perfect match for it. If you wanted to add a third, you could consider adding "spiritual" or "inspirational" too.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have two little suggestions to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

In the description, I'd recommend changing "thru" to "through," as I believe that is the proper spelling.

In the main poem, I'd recommend bolding the first letter of each line so the "Joyous Adventure" stands out more to future readers.

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:

I enjoyed reading your "Joyous Adventure" poem, and appreciated your heart for the Lord.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance during this New Year, your anniversary month, and always!

PWheeler










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