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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
More poems for Promptly Poetry, stuffed into this book because I have reached my limit.
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Greetings, Ned!

I'm here again as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

I've probably said this several times to everyone participating, but I love seeing how we all respond differently and uniquely to the prompts. This particular set of words seemed to imply a rather "run of the mill" interpretation, but you've made it special by tapping into an era of great upheaval, where fortunes were lost and people found out who their friends were. I'm a fan of the Depression era American Girl character, Kit, and that time of US history has been a source of inspiration for me.

I've never heard of the movie you refer to, but I can see it sounds interesting. You forgot a line count at the end of your poem; it'll make Lilli's life just a bit easier if you have one *Wink* Perhaps also highlight the prompt words as they're used.

Aside from these little nitpicky details, I see nothing about the poem to suggest changing. You've captured a snapshot of an era in a few simple yet profound words.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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