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 Dalthyrian Open in new Window. [E]
My dragon from my books
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy new year, Fyn!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

A whimsical rhyming poem about your (the narrator's?) favorite dragon. We see how much they love the creature; it must be a nice dragon if it has vast libraries! That's my kind of mythological creature *BigSmile*

Biographically speaking, I love how you've given this a gentle personal touch. I feel as though you really are speaking about a dragon you believe is "real." As authors and dreamers, we have a kinship with the characters we create, and I can identify with having an "imaginary" companion following one's life journey.

I notice you have a big empty space at the bottom of the item, before the prompt info. Perhaps you should hit the backspace key a few times there. Also, a line count is required for the project, even just to make Lilli’s life a bit easier *Wink* The bold font is a bit too “bold…” perhaps a larger size would suffice. This looks a bit too much like the impact font, which is rarely used (I always wonder why it’s here at all… *Think*) Oh, it’s always best to add a third genre, maybe “Personal” or “Writing” or “Fantasy.” This allows you to quantify for as many Quill nominations as possible.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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