Hi Jay,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and filled with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want read on. The poem is about someone who decides to be who they are and not fit in, even though there many others demanding that they do. I have always done my own thing and not bothered with what others wanted. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.