Hi ElBroke Troll,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is filled with surprise and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why Jake is going from body to body. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about man who starts inhabiting the bodies of various women while he is waiting to meet a friend at the airport. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have slipped between the past and present tense. You should keep your tenses consistent to keep your writing consistent for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view. Great job.