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A speech written exploring the duel facets of pride, using the rotary 4 way test.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com! I’m glad to see you here and hope you can spend a little more time with us, especially during the holidays.

The first thing I need to tell you is that your title is misspelled. I didn't see anything else in my quick proofread. Then, I’d like to share the importance of modifying your font size with the row of tiles over the text entry box. I would recommend using size 4 or even 4.5 with the font you have here, for a better reading experience.

Now, with those little formatting things out of the way, I can express admiration for the subject you’ve laid out here. The balance between pride and hubris is something we all struggle with, indeed it’s a basic human thing of life. We accomplish things, we get praised, we learn and grow and improve ourselves, always striving to balance a humble heart with a strong sense of self-worth and confidence to handle everything we can dream of.

Your use of well-known Greek mythology to illustrate the care which one must be taken to guard one’s personality is a good idea. I also like the use of personal anecdotes to help explain in a relatable and immediate way the pitfalls of hubris versus humility. I can definitely relate to the experience in your art class, especially around here. I usually get lovely complimentary fluff reviews admiring my work… so when I get the occasional suggestion for improvement, I might feel miffed and not take it seriously. So this is a reminder for me and all of us to never stop learning and improving and accepting advice.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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