Hi Lou,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who is in the middle of the changing seasons and the upheaval it causes. I can always tell when a new season is coming. Sometimes, it's just in the smell of air. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.