Hi Northside,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is both direct and enigmatic at the same time. The reader knows that your community is making changes but not which changes. They will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. The piece is about your community is changing its outlook and how it gets things done. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer, and at your community. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.