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A Taste of Desire Open in new Window. [18+]
A culinary mishap sparks unexpected passion between neighbors.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Carrying Writer,

This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with contentment and serenity as Samantha is watching something calmly on her tablet. The reader is completely pulled in by the calm of the chapter and will read on. The is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the story. The cooking disaster turning into a romantic interlude is very compelling. The dialogue is well done and consistent. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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