Hi miirasunlight,

This is a fantastic essay. The title is both enigmatic and direct at the same time. The reader knows they will be reading about someone in distress but not exactly how. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about a time in your life when you lost inspiration and struggled to write. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.