Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. Set in a distant dystopian future, a corporation has taken over everything - what to wear, what to watch, and more - heck, the TV is used as a spying tool. However, there seems to be some sort of Resistance group trying to fight for justice in this world.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want some space between paragraphs. Makes reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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