Hi SophyBells , I found your writing in the Read and Review section. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
A good title, but with current world affairs in mind it even could be a stronger word.

General impressions

Wow, I loved this free verse. It hit the nail right on the head. Nothing has changed with people and religion, it became even worse IMHO. Parties hate each other and there is hardly common ground.

Favorite Parts

Isn't it ironic
that the one thing
that could bring us all together
is that thing
which tears us apart?

This stanza is great and I loved the repetition. Great rhythm, sad poem but deep thoughts underneath.

Suggestions

No errors, except the title, too mild nowadays. Adding 'devastatingly ironic' would be appropriate with current affairs.


Final thoughts

I could cry over this poem and what it means for the world and people. But I am an agnostic, so there you go.

Thanks for sharing!

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive~"HoHoHo"



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