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Jimmy and the Bean Open in new Window. [E]
Jimmy finds a magic bean.
by Beholden Author Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Beholden Author IconMail Icon;

I pressed the read and review button on the side panel of the Writing.com website and lo and behold your piece came up for me to review.

So here I am, 💙 Carly- Hello 2025 Author IconMail Icon.

I found this an interesting wee piece. Jimmy and the bean... I wonder what adventures he has way up there in the sky, but this story is about how he found that seed and how he planted it.

It was an interesting read. I enjoyed the style you chose to use to tell this story:
"And now it’s up to you. I can confirm that, the next morning, when Jimmy went to check on the bean, he was confronted with a beanstalk that reached up to the sky. And I can tell you that he climbed up that beanstalk until he disappeared with it into the blue of its immense height. And I also have to report that he was never seen again.

But this is all hearsay. It’s up to you whether you believe it or not. And that, of course, is entirely a matter of choice."

It has a newspaper reporter kind of vibe to it.

It looks like this was written to a prompt during the Game of Thrones Challenge. I do hope you did well with the piece.

Hope your enjoying the Birthday Celebrations going on this week.

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