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 Carving stone with water Open in new Window. [E]
Persistance vs. Quality of Life. Based on a Chinese Proverb
by SWPoet Author Icon
Review by Cubby Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Impression: This is such a beautiful piece. I love the drip, drip, drip in the first and third stanzas. I can hear the drips and feel the strength of water over time. Such devotion to those who measure and wait! It's definitely not something I would want to spend my time focusing on it, but it's interesting.

Thoughts/Suggestions: I wouldn't change a thing. I read it several times, enjoying your poem about persistence vs. quality of life.

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I am awed at the strength
of a mere drop of water,
and the dogged persistence of man
to pretend he is God.


Nice work!

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