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 Caleb stops at a gas station Open in new Window. [E]
How can stopping for gas be such a battle? So many decisions in a single moment.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A man stops at a gas station. Now, you might think that this is nothing new - go in, pre-pay for gas, and fill the gas tank. However, it seems that this is a little different, for the man has a devil riding shotgun on his shoulder, trying to tempt him with an item that is forbidden - Delicious Coca-Cola. Will he avoid this temptation, or will the Devil get their way? Read to find out.

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The characters seem interesting.

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