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The Beach Open in new Window. [E]
Peace is found in the turmoil of the sea. [The Quadrilew]
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg meandering or prowling in a space time continuum over to your port?

I saw that your site anniversary (your 15th I believe if I did the math right!) is this week so I wanted to read and send a review!

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What does tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

Your well chosen words provide the perfect end of summer reading. Your poem flows well and you manage to paint a picture that defines the season over time. Your title is engaging and, therefore, fits perfectly. Very straightforward and evocative!

I do hope you will return soon to enjoy the site.

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What does tHiNg applaud about while reading your item?

Your poem brought back many memories for me - some of times at the beach enjoying the season and some that are more recent. I went to Arlington Cemetery and this brought back the feeling I had there earlier this summer. It is fitting that the season should start and conclude with eloquent words.

This is my favorite passage:

"The soul cannot ignore
the powerful peace
of surfs' deafening roar
and ebbs’ soft release."

As I get older, I fine that nature and the seasons and their traditions defines life in a way that popular culture does not. We go back to what we are familiar with and what matters. Time at the shore is to be cherished all throughout life if we take it in properly.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much. To read such lovely words helps me make it through another day with fond memories and a smile.

So, well done! Come back soon!

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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