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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi D.K.D.,

Welcome to our community. Thank you for your individual request to review your work "Mirrored." I am honored to give you some thoughts which come from one person. I hope they will resonate with you.

First impression: Your presentation is fabulous and professional. Your description of the work, in itself, is a huge hook that had me engaged before I started to read. Nice job! The increased size of the text is a huge plus. It is so much easier to comfortably read. Keep doing that. The lay out of one line paragraphs is effective.

Content: The story, identified as fiction, is about as real as you can write! I liked the universal theme that I can relate to, as I presume every reader will do the same. Your word choices fit well. The comments of the two characters I named "me" and "myself" showed the theme throughout. It was unique and outright fun to read, anticipate, and savor an original plot.

Overall impression: You are an accomplished and gifted writer. A suggestion which comes out of being new. When you select the genres to categorize your writing, selecting a total of three specific ones will help people who search for their favorite genre locate your work. There is the Search feature near the top of the left hand navigation panel. Notice the drop down box when you type in that box. Therefore, "other" would be one you would want to replace with another genre like psychology and emotional or experience.

Thank you for the privilege of reading one of your early works. It gave me reason to think about how I would feel going through the same exercise. Best of all, owing to your expertise and my thirst for new to me original writing, I was left wanting more! Welcome again!

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