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Greetings, sir,

I can see you are very excited to share your knowledge with us on the zodiac and constellations and how they correlate in wondrous ways with the biblical accounts. I look forward to following your voyage of discovery, and yes, I guess I'll ask for a copy of your journal.

The opening lines confused me a bit as I had never heard of that planet (Make Make) or the fact about the etymology of the word "altar..." which by the way are you sure you're spelling correctly? There's a difference between "altering" and worshipping at an "altar." Perhaps some explanation or even a link to an outside source of what exactly that dwarf planet is would be helpful.

I found the rest of your explanation and setup to be clear and easy to understand. I like how you bolded certain key words and phrases to emphasize them for clarity. The premise is fascinating and you've promised to continue the series, which will keep us coming. Be sure to let us know when the next posts are added.

My mom spent many years delving into the ancient Hebrew calendars, as part of her research into the origins of Christianity and the significance of the Essenes in the formation of Christian beliefs. She never could quite wrap her head around the concepts of the ancient calendars, especially since there was a conflict between the Pharisees and the Essenes as to which one was God-ordained, solar or lunar. The proper calendar has huge implications as to the timeline of history, even down to calculating which day of the week is actually the seventh day Sabbath. There were many arguments about when the high holy days should be, and much went on back then which goes almost unrealized today.

I can't think of much advice for you going forward; just be sure to lay everything out as clearly as possible, and perhaps if there are diagrams and pictures included in your journal (or notes, or whatever) that would be quite a help to us as we explore what you've learned.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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