family night in with the Johnsons [E] a Yahtzee game |
HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Greetings, Rhyssa! I am reviewing this because today is your 23rd WDC Anniversary and I am part of the Anniversary Team here at Writing.com. First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked YAHTZEE!!! Oh my word, I've played a lot of this fun dice game years ago! My grandmother used to play it, by herself and with grandchildren. So then I had to buy the game and play it with my kids! First, we always played single Yahtzee; then we switched to triple, which was even more fun, in my opinion! So now you can see why your poem attracted my interest, lol. I could hear the yells and groans and cheers, visualize the frowns and smiles, and feel the hope for a Yahtzee! And seriously, I can hear the rattle of the dice before they are rolled. Nice imagery! And why does Mama always win? For me, it was my grandmother who always won. But it was the same question of why??? Suggestions/Comments to Consider I have no suggestions. Final Thoughts Thank you for bringing me down memory lane! A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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