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 A Sky Full of Stars  [13+]
Related to, in some manner, the song, A Sky Full of Stars by Coldplay. My first vignette.
by jackson
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Greetings,

A brief and mythical tale we have here, not written in a passive narrative form but written with dialogue and scene setting in a poetic and even lyrical fashion. Inspired by the themes of eternal love and loss expressed in the Coldplay song offered as a prompt, we see the rebuilding of these themes into a fable simple yet profound. The three scenes are set off tidily with asterisks, and the font is large and clear.

My only suggestion here would be to add two more relevant genres so as to allow for as many Quill Award nominations as possible. I might suggest “Mythology” and “Folklore.” A word count would also be nice, as this looks to be not much over a couple hundred words.

A poignant and timeless vignette, set up well and formatted properly. I enjoyed reading it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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