Well, this is a bit of a tragic story. A woman lost her son, and is having a hard time getting over it. Despite the help of a doctor, the pain becomes far too much for her to deal with. As a result, she makes her own plans, in order to try to see her son again.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar issues.

Suggestions
Some space between the lines might be helpful, especially if each line is its own separate paragraph.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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