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The Beauty of Summer  [E]
If you think for a minute, God is the sun of our lives.
by Spiritual Dawning
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear Spiritual Dawning ,

I'm struck by two things immediately when I read this poem and want to share my thoughts since you were kind to give attention to one of the items in my portfolio this night.

Happy to see you fully restored fellow member. *Wink* The poem I came across was discovered after perusing several parts of your portfolio. And, since I'm a lover of the seasonal, found myself walking through the aisles of nature poems right to this. I apologize. I passed up the folder with things that haven't been reviewed yet. I think I was drawn to something that was just the right size for my eyes to consume tonight.

What I alluded to in the open was two things: there is a very natural flow and rhythm to this read that made it pleasing to pace through these words and consider the message that was poetically portrayed. I believe readers will be swayed by your free and easy approach to poem and the ethereal relating of it's phrasings.

What actually struck me most was the narration and it's command. I find, coupled with the read, is a voice that wants to lead, be assuring, give comfort and joy. A lot of times messages and voices like this in stuff I stumble across, wherever I've roamed, are lacking in an approach like yours. It's warming to be embraced by something so positive with a sense of its own healing nature.

I've read poems of yours in the past and by far this has captured my attention. I've appreciate knowing I can commune amid poets offering a passion and desire to share this brand of joy in what they commit to the screen I've stared at tonight. Thank you.

I just scrolled up and did see a typo for 'friend' on first line of third verse. Never noticed during read. Heck, I'm blind. I miss lots of stuff. But, have been happy to help, as I feel compelled to rub elbows and assimilate with like minded writers who graffiti paint word walls with ardor. This poem compels me.

Have a great day,

Brian
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