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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE ARTICLE

The article highlights the US Basketball team in exhibition play right before the Paris Olympics.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

The article touches on the highlights well. You get the flavor of what occured without the article being long winded.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is written in a very journalist style that is very matter of fact.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any punctuation mistakes. I spotted just one spelling mistake. As written: "He set the tone." Should be: "He sets the tone." Good use of WDC to increase the font and space between paragraphs to make it easier to read on the website.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. It's a good recap. I would read more articles by this author.

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