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I really enjoyed the detail and description in this piece. I thought you did a great job painting a vivid scene in comparatively few words, although it did feel like more of a vignette or anecdote as opposed to a cohesive narrative with a beginning, middle, and end. That said, I enjoyed the read. Nice job!

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