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 Death Happens  [ASR]
Monologue - A person recounts a debate getting out of hand.
by Dreamward Bound
Review of Death Happens  
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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It is a good writing. I must admire that effort but it is not a Flash Fiction. It becomes a Monologue. The Monologue is a thought opinion of a single speaker. The speech is uninterrupted. Like here, the speaker shares the self-experience of difficulty in burying a body which he certainly didn't know at least a year ago.
It doesn't follow the characteristics of a Flash Fiction. A few conversations will also bring the required pace which is a demand of every Flash Fiction.
You are most welcome on our site.
Keep writing.

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