Everyday Canvas [18+] Second blog -- answers to an ocean of prompts |
HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Hello, Joy! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: I enjoyed reading your take on this blog prompt! Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting. You did a much better job than I would have. I had a one word answer (all), and figured that didn't merit a whole blog post, so I skipped that day. You clearly put a lot more thought into yours, yet you said almost what I would have (just better!) had I given it more thought. I agree with you wholeheartedly. I love how you value your time and keep priorities in mind. "I'm now very careful with how I spend my hours." Some people may be careful with some hours, but few are careful with their leisure / reading hours. You are wise! You are also very kind! Even though you are careful with your time, because you are such a great lover of Writing.Com, you are willing to dedicate that precious commodity to your fellow writers here. I didn't realize that scammers could use reviews to target people. That's terrible. I did know that scammers create false reviews (good and bad, depending on their goal) and think that's terrible too. I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your blog post. I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this blog post of yours, and for the blog in general. I think I mentioned it before, but just in case I didn't, I love your blog's thumbnail picture. IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: I would love to have something great to share here, but I think your writing is wonderful as it is. Well done! There is one tiny little possible typo though. I think there's an extra period in this sentence: "I can only buy it in e-bay or Amazon's used books for about $45., which I stay away from." It's right after the $45, before the comma. Though maybe somewhere that's the way it's done? I usually just see it as $45, or $45.00, though. CONCLUSION: You have a great writing style and I enjoyed reading your thoughtful blog post. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, ideas, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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