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 Miss Little Open in new Window. [13+]
What you knew then vs what you know now. Society tags for the naivety you had.
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Review of Miss Little  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi dear slim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the things you learn about yourself as time goes on and how that shapes the person you become. I have learned to much about myself over the years and have always tried to make something positive out of these lessons. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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