This review comes to you from HSP's "HSPs - The Basics of Erotic Writing"   by Purple OnePride

Characters:
Ted lets his jealousy come full circle. It gives great insight into his backstory, how long he's been a vampire, and what he's learned, liked, and still loves two hundred years later.

Sandra was completely blown away by Ted's outburst at the restaurant. Even hearing his explanation, she wasn't buying it. It will be interesting to see what happens next as Ted goes through all of it to let her see just what the reaction did to him and his bloodlust.

Setting:
Ted's anger and jealousy were palpable. I liked the old-style telephone being mentioned. Ted showing Sandra his canines was a good move because it let her know the seriousness of the situation.

Overall Impression:
I will only mention that the moment she rested her hand on his chest, the story jumped to his teeth. I'm assuming his heart was beating so fast, or not, or something else that would have shocked her even further.

Technical:
When he heard the dial tone,