This review comes to your from HSP's "HSPs - The Basics of Erotic Writing" by Purple OnePride Characters: Sandra is a photographer and comes home late after a rough day. Ted has already prepared dinner and even went so far to call and inquire about an eta. The dynamics of their relationship are firmly established and it was easy to tap into their connection. Setting: I liked the fact that once Sandra was able to relax, she realized that Ted had made her his special Chicken parmigiana. Sensual Elements: Good job here. What I found the most sensual was Ted rubbing her hands and the reactions of that simple action. Overall Impression: You have an interesting couple that peaked my interest. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take these characters. Technical: No issues.
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