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 Mending Fences  [E]
Cowboy's thoughts on life.
by Bearclaw
Review of Mending Fences  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hallo!
Since the term 'mending fences' could (I think) mean making up after a quarrel or reuniting after an estrangement, the title intrigued me.

I was surprised when it was about actual, physical fences and I wonder if you intended this ... ?

The poem made me think about someone I had never considered before - a guy on horseback mending fences. The imagery is evocative. The sentiment expressed at the end - happy to have a job though it is hard - is thought provoking.

I'm not sure if you've gone in for a particular rhyme scheme, but my reading wasn't very smooth. Maybe you'd like to read it aloud and tweak it a bit if you think that's necessary.

Also, maybe you'd like to use some WritingML line font, size, center and line-space.

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On,
Sonali

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