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Review #4749299
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 Lessons  [E]
Flash Fiction
by Jacky
Review of Lessons  
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's truly a wonderful Flash Fiction. There are only two characters, Tim and the small boy. That boy wanted to know whether Tim saw any ghosts or not. Tim felt funny in his attitude.
But, the story was story was running at a faster pace and interesting way. Ultimately, the boy disappeared. Tim learned what the ghost was.
The compactness of the story must be appreciated.
Write on!
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