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Forget Maytag. Do the Roomba Rumba!  [13+]
Strickly in fun, but a good lesson about humans over machines.
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A "Game of Thrones"   by Gaby ~ Way behind! Review


Storyline: I swear it is always the case: when one thing breaks, expect at least two more appliances to decide it is past time to time and make you fork over more money for new and improved versions. At least the companies claim they are new and improved. I have been on the fence for a solid year now about getting one of these things, hoping it will keep my wood floors clean while I'm at work. I think I'm too cheap to break down and actually do it. *Laugh*

Spelling/Grammar Issues: No issues.

Description/emotion: The visual of the planks and the Roomba getting stuck was comical. So was the Roomba hiding under the couch and waiting for the exact moment you decide to walk by and it creeps out and knocks you off balance. It sounds scary, and I'm not sure I would appreciate something like that happening.

Overall Impression: Your comedic timing in the midst of all these things going on in your life is impressive. However I must say, that these days, it's almost imperative that you keep a sense of humor because when bad things happen, they tend to happen in rapid succession. It's like the fates lined up and said one slap is not enough, it should come in threes. I don't know, but that's what it feel like anyway, and this story leans toward proving me right!


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