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Hey! COME BACK WITH MY KID! Open in new Window. [E]
A visit to Fishermen's Wharf followed by Cable Car pandemonium, frays a family's nerves.
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A "Game of Thrones"  Open in new Window. by Creeper Of The Realm Author Icon Review


Storyline: Vacationing in California leads to a scary, albeit funny story that can be told for decades to come. Finding humor in the most unexpected places is always a good thing, and this was great. The family on a fascinating vacation, cameras in hand, ready to see the sites and then something inevitably goes wrong. Isn't that always the way of it.

Spelling/Grammar Issues: None

Description/emotion: I had to feel bad for the father chasing after his teen who didn't get off the trolley car, screaming obscenities, running as fast as possible, though it was comical too. You made it easy to picture that scene with the daughter's horrified reaction to realizing the rest of the family had gotten off.

Overall Impression: I am enjoying these little tidbits from family life and how you manage to make the best of what could be really scary situations. The reactions fo the family are spot-on, especially the grandmother in tears. I've been there myself with one of these situations where they think their loved one will never return, or horrible things are about to happen. Solid advice for the rest of us when it comes to family vacations and staying alert and together. Nice job!



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