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DO NOT ANNOY THE UNMEDICATED PERSON Open in new Window. [18+]
Law school tales of weirdness and woe with a twist
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A straightforward, humorous and honest description of the stresses involved in attending law school and how different people in your field handled them.

I found the autobiographical story to be quite interesting. I’m glad you got through your law school education without having to self medicate or becoming afflicted with some disorder. I’m considering getting a law degree myself, and I know I would try my best to avoid dealing with the stress involved in a way which could lead to further problems down the road.

As a personal essay, I have nothing to suggest by way of improvements. It was clear and easy to read, and I’m glad to know a little more about you as a person. (Is that a picture of you at the top?)

I would recommend Size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability and accessibility across devices. I noticed your subtitle doesn’t seem to match the somewhat brief, partly summarized and mostly narrative story. It seems to imply a series of stories rather than just one essay.

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