Hello, Maryanne!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I was surprised to see that I hadn't reviewed this awesome group of yours yet. Better now than never though, I hope. I also hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Kudos on your well-deserved Quill wins for this wonderful reviewing and community building group of SuperPower Reviewers! Well done!

The first time I visited this page, you kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Great way to catch my attention, keep it, and make me want to join your group (which I promptly did, if I recall correctly). Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Your group page is well designed, with a coherent theme, and has lots of links, images, and variety for interest.

You even included a bunch of trinkets for visitors. What a nice gift!

I never before recalled noticing that all the previous reviews are hosted here, but I noticed today and think that's super cool.

I liked that you included links to the group's two fundraising shops. It's easy to forget about them, so hopefully that helps everyone remember more easily.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes in your review group page. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, I have a couple little suggestions to make your piece stronger. I'm having to dig deep for these as I really thought your piece was well done as it is though. So if you want to skip this part, no worries at all!

In the drop down menu for raid reviewing it currently says this: "We run two day review raids every other month, which is the reviewing of any item on writing.com." But I think some are one-day review raids... so maybe it would be better to say "one or two-day review raids" versus two day (and if you leave "two day," I think there should be a dash there, so it would look like this: "two-day").

In that same section it says, "One month we raid on weekends and the next one will be during the week." I think that might be leftover from when we used to have monthly raids? Now that it's every other month, it might be more true to say something like, "We alternate between weekend and weekday raids so everyone has a chance to participate." I added the extra part at the end because I think that's the aim and it sounds nicer to me.

These are just my ideas and opinions though. You're an awesome leader and whatever you think is best, is great!


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and sense of humor and I love being a part of the WDC SuperPower Reviewers Group and highly recommend it. Well done!

Thank you for leading us and sharing your time, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler











Positive Hearts
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